- Wanted the sound garden incorporated into the challenge, like "theres an animal coming, make noise to scare it off"
- Incorporate a "lookout" challenge, make it more active?
- Mission journal as one big book.
Dossier Feedback
- Snappy intro, good
- Need a reference list
- Research citing!!
- four P's is better before the macro trends - better intro to the gardens. Not just filler text..
- Not "competition" but collaborated
- Transformation could be expanded on
- Citations
- Citations
- Citations and references
- Lets fix it - why is this important??
- Make the macro trends relevant...
- The visuals were good, appropriate, fun, engaging.
Idea for the map
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