Tuesday, 20 September 2016

Client meeting + dossier feedback

- Liked the name and the level ideas so far
- Wanted the sound garden incorporated into the challenge, like "theres an animal coming, make noise to scare it off"
- Incorporate a "lookout" challenge, make it more active?
- Mission journal as one big book.

Dossier Feedback


  • Snappy intro, good
  • Need a reference list
  • Research citing!!
  • four P's is better before the macro trends - better intro to the gardens. Not just filler text..
  • Not "competition" but collaborated
  • Transformation could be expanded on
  • Citations
  • Citations
  • Citations and references
  • Lets fix it - why is this important??
  • Make the macro trends relevant...
  • The visuals were good, appropriate, fun, engaging.


Idea for the map


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